the road out of hell

then I was just a pathetic nobody

it felt like no one could hear me cry

and now my race to hell has been run

I’m out of the darkness and into the sun

feeling the warm breeze hearing the ocean

I’ll never forget the real love of the true one

but life isn’t the same since she has been gone

her leaving wasn’t easy, she had to say goodbye

seems I’m barely hanging on and it’s all so wrong


jack collier



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(p.s. I’m not actually feeling like that today.)

16 responses

  1. Sad words expressed bring healing of unmeasurable worth!💟

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    1. Thank you for your kind comment. ❤


  2. Awww…so beautiful! Being in the sun is wonderful…even if you’re alone. Better than being in hell with someone, right? Maybe the new you will attract the woman of your dreams?

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    1. Thank you. Who is to say that I’m not dreaming of Aphrodite. ❤ ❤ 😉


  3. great yet sad write, but glad you’re feeling good ❤ hey Marm ❤

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    1. Marmaduke sends a big hug. ❤

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  4. Such a sad man. He misses her and doesn’t know what to do…
    So glad you weren’t feeling this way for realsies! 😉

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    1. Awww, thank you ever so. ❤ ❤ ,3

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  5. Beautiful, yet so sad. I am glad you added that last part, to let us know you aren’t actually feeling like that today, as I was getting worried.

    Hugs ‘n love, Jack! ❤ ❤ ❤

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    1. I thought I’d better put in the disclaimer ~ I’m feeling damn good, but sometimes my poetry comes out terribly sad.
      Maybe I should have left it sad, and gone for sympathy love. ❤

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      1. Well … at least you can write poetry. I have tried my hand a few times, and all I can come up with is bawdry limericks! 😀 But yes, I was thankful for the disclaimer and no, you should not have left it sad, for then I would have been sad thinking about you being sad! My love, however, you have … as always! Hugs, sweet man! ❤

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  6. That’s the only way I’d ever,

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  7. And I can’t catch a ride? Oh well.

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    1. You can ride shotgun with me any time. ❤

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